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Save The Whales

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Literature Text

Save the whales,
Kill the children,
Laugh at hard work,
Save the victim,

A world of Freedom,
Let my explain,
You try too hard,
Let Me tell you what thoughts to entertain,

Yelling and screaming a response,
Is better then reason,
Can't you feel my emotion,
That is what is in season,

Give me what you have,
I am too tired to wake,
I'm entitled,
So give For Goodness sake,

My parents say I am special,
I play sports where everyone wins,
Give me what you have,
You must pay for your sins,

Freedom is for special people,
Those who see the path,
I can tell you what to do,
You will likely gasp,

My problems are because of you,
I was perfect until I had to think,
My thoughts are special,
But not worth a thing,

So, give me what you have,
I deserve it because I breath,
Contribution is overrated,
Freedom is the song I sing ........
Talk is cheap .. if you want something work for it and stop whining. There are no garantees.
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HigherDesign's avatar
It's been so long since I've been in the world of poetry so forgive me if I at first didn't kinda get it. But still its a good message. very creatives verses you put there. Outside of the understanding thing I can't really say anything stood out to me to work on. Pretty Good!